Victory!
I felt victorious when the whole time I listened to this song :P
I could see this song playing on the "YOU WIN!" or "CONGRATULATIONS!" page that some games have after you complete them. It has a heroic and victorious feel to it, as I stated before.
Great job man. I really liked it!
Cool!
I usually don't thoroughly enjoy 8-bit stuff, but this one is cool! I also really enjoyed the part at about 1:50 :D
The only things that bothered me were the parts where the main synth faded out and that it was a bit too repetative. But other that, its a really cool 8-bit song! :)
5/5
aah, thanks.. and thanks for the cirtisism :)
Woah... :O
This song rocks! That synth is freakin' awesome as well! And the fact that this was recorded in real time just makes it even cooler! :D
It's a really cool loop. The only problems that bother me are that it needs a bit variety and the kick needs more bass to it because I can barely hear it. Also, it seems like this would go into the "video game" genre rather than "trance." I could totally see this music used for an epic boss fight or something :P
5/5 from me!
Thanks :D
I was checking out your songs and its really appreciated to hear such comment from someone of your caliber.
Indeed, I was about to submit it to the video-game section, but that would make people think this is a video-game remix and not an original production.
I made the song originally (2003) for an animation I still having in mind, with the time the concept and maturity of the song is growing so, I expect I will have the real deal eventually.
Thanks again :1
LOL...pedophile...
Parents can be silly, can't they? xD But jokes aside, onto the review...
This song is yet another masterpiece. The overall mastering is great, the lead melodies are catchy, and the background ambient melodies really add a cool effect to it. It's kinda underwater-y :P
However, there were a few things that bothered me. The percussion was kind of bland like I said in a review another song of yours. Try to make it more "real" sounding instead of having it sound like it was obviously made with a synthesizer. Also, the piano sounded a bit weak. Maybe you should try to add a bit more reverb or delay on it or increase the overall EQ'ing on it, but that's just my opinion.
Oh, put a bit more bass in your kicks. I barely hear them towards the end of the song! A good, strong, bass-y kick can really make your song stand out, but don't make it TOO loud :)
Overall, fantastic job. It's hard to believe that you have improved so quickly! I can only imagine how awesome your songs will be in a few years! Just keep at it man!
And as a word of advice for the future: try to incorporate different styles and genres into your music. For example, look at the various genres I've covered so far with my producing. Doing this can really give you some cool and interesting ideas! :)
So...5/5 (as always :D)
Your friend, UncleSqueezins (Cameron :D)
(P.S. I was serious when I said that you have the potential of making it big one day...)
im just parinoid about making the kick too loud haha...
and ya i need to work on my percussion.. gotta take it easy with the kick clap kick
and the piano was ment to be weak.. it was just something to help fill in the song
Sweet!
(I'm going to make this review short and to the point because I'm lazy xD)
It's a kickass song even though I don't normally enjoy "generic dance." I loved the intro and the main melody. Also, cut out the vocals and crowd sound FX and use something different like a backup melody or something.
5/5 :D
Its actually not that bad!
I enjoyed this! For your first try at hardstyle, I think you did a pretty good job. The only problem is that the kick is almost completely silent. I could barely hear it over everything else. Good job though! :)
Hmm...
Well, you do know that I'm not into this genre, but that won't have any affect on this review.
I can tell you spent a good amount of time one this one. The overall EQ'ing is very good and it had a good atmosphere. It kind of felt like I was underwater or something :P However, it was really short and there are a few major flaws.
First off, PLEASE don't use the crowd sound FX anymore. I can tell you like to use it, but in my opinion, it is just extra noise. But if you MUST use it, then try not to make it so prominent. Also, the bass and kick need more bass and "umph." A good bass is key because it supports the other ingredients of the song, so keep that in mind next time :)
But overall, I enjoyed it and I'm glad to see you working on some new songs.
4/5 for the hard work and effort :)
You've got a huge amount of skill...
...for being 13. I'm not a big fan of generic dance like this, but from this song, I can tell that you're skill will evolve into something great!
For the song itself, its pretty catchy. I liked the melodies and the synths you used. I think the hi hats were a bit to loud though. I really enjoyed the little build up at 1:34 :)
Just keep producing and keep learning about FL Studio man. I use it as well and you can make some pretty insane sounds if you know how to use it :) I looked at a few of your other songs as well and I encourage you to branch out from techno/dance. I bet you could make some AMAZING classical pieces if you tried it! :)
Fell free to remix any of my songs! I want you to get practice and expand your skill level as much as possible!
Best wishes for the future! :)
Thank you so much for your encouragement. Much obliged.
Daft Punk much?
This song has the feel of a Daft Punk song...which is FREAKIN' AWESOME!!! The gritty bass, the sci-fi sound effects (I heard a couple of those in there), and the awesome breakbeats...GENIUS!
Fantastic job man!
Its different...
...but different is good :) I can tell that you were experimenting and shooting for something new here.
Its really unique and I've never heard anything like it. The variation of drums and synths kept me entertained throughout and it had a glitch feel to it which was kind of cool even though I'm not a big fan of it.
It has a sublime feel to it overall. It reminds of the music in the Metroid Prime series (a video game). You should look up some of the Metroid Prime music. I bet you could get a few ideas from it :)
5/5 from me! :D
Woah, thanks uncle,
It's indeed different. I know Metroid Prime, but I don't know the music.. I'll look it up .
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